No Title Lyrics Critique- Punk/Pop song, Somewhat of an up tempo

by Corey
(New Hampshire)

I'm getting back into writing lyrics, I'm in a band now and I'm hoping to really get somewhere with it. For us it's about the music and at times, the message we're getting out there. Even if you hate this write a comment, don't just read it. Thanks

I want something I've never had
One thing to make me complete
But I have to do something I've never done
Gotta fess up, tell the truth, express my feelings
For you it isn't a question, done in a heartbeat
Hours spent analyzing the ceiling
Choosing the right words and phrases
To say when the time comes
To fess up, tell the truth, and express these feelings

I've got all that my money can buy
What money can't buy is you
You're one of a kind, the only ray of light on this cloudy day
Bring sunshine to my life
Smile, laugh, make my day and I'll know everything's ok
You could be the one I've been looking for all my life
You're beautiful in every way

I've let my nerves take control for long enough
Time to fess up, tell the truth, and express these feelings
To be complete, I'm gonna do something I've never done
Chase the dream, and get what I've never had

That's all I have right now. I'm still writing as the words come to me. Let me know what you think. This is a verse, chorus, and a bridge; in that order.