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no one said lyrics feedback

by kaylee marie
(england )

are my lyrics any good to produce???
verse;
when you put your hands on me,
i feel so sexy.
i loose my self controll,
i dont no how to be what you like.
your finger tips on my hips,
move me like one of a kind
chorus;
no one said are love was gonna be easy,
are relationship gets a little bit sleezy,
listen to the words that i say
never listen to the lies and jealously
baby i love you so much.
verse;
remember when it didnt work
your friends were being such jerks
i stopped and looked past all of that
then found you on the other end
i said
chorus;
no one said are love was gonna be easy,
are relationship gets a little bit sleezy,
listen to the words that i say
never listen to the lies and jealously
baby i love you so much.
bridge;
ill be there for you
making you wait for my love
i gotta let you know
this loves for you...
chorus;
no one said are love was gonna be easy,
are relationship gets a little bit sleezy,
listen to the words that i say
never listen to the lies and jealously
baby i love you so much.


hope this is ok thanks x







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May 14, 2009
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wow
by: Anonymous

yeah this is a little gross

Jun 04, 2009
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Yeah.
by: Gage Helms

I don't wanna be mean here but..

This song does suck, Maybe it was a bad day or something but yeah. Also, I really think the beginning was sluttish, Good luck next time.

ROCK ON!

Jun 26, 2009
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ha... i hope that was a joke
by: Anonymous

yeeaah.. it sorta, ya know, terrible. its gross and you misspelled every other word, and you try to rhyme words that are not meant to rhyme. seriously.. go like paint or something, songwriting sure isnt your thing.

Jul 15, 2010
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POOOOOOOOOP
by: Anonymous

sry but u gotts dig deep to feel the passion and blah blah blah u didnt do that, its like you took the script of a rated "R" movie and tried to make it rhyme.

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