"No More Tomorrows Critique - Country Song"

by zack taylor
(anderson, south carolina)

Be extremely honest


Verse 1:

I took some chances,
and i didnt do, some of the stuff
that i needed to
now im wishing for
one more chance with you

Chorus:
What would you say
if there was no more tomorrows
what would you do
just to ease your sorrows
I would tell you how i feel
hoping today's not a dream
and its real.

Break

Verse 2:
Im finally going
to get that chance
to do what i never did before
I hope it works out for us
and can lead to something more.

Chorus:
What would you say
if there was no more tomorrows
what would you do
just to ease your sorrows
I would tell you how i feel
hoping today's not a dream
and its real.

Verse 3:
You could call me your lover,
and your friend
I would be your baby
and your man
be the air around you and
be the grass under your feet
our love would be hotter
than the sun's heat.

Chorus:
What would you say
if there was no more tomorrows
what would you do to ease your sorrows
I would tell you how i feel
hoping today's not a dream
and its real.

What would you say
What would you do
If there was no tomorrows