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No More Secrets - Pop, unknown genre - Lyrics Critique

by Emma

Hi, I'm really open to specific comments like if I don't really make sense at a certain point or if you think I could use some better words. I'm not quite sure what genre my music is, I think it might be Pop, sorry. Oh, and please note that sometimes the song has a bit of a strange beat, so it might not sound that right just as words. Thanks!

*Music on guitar.

Verse 1
There you are sitting across from me
Sitting way back into your seat
Tears falling from your eyes
This is the hardest that I’ve seen you cry

And you’re reading all the things we’d said you’d done
‘Cause this is how we finally end up
Awkward silence
With no more forward directions

Pre-Chorus
I...
Know you still have things you hide
Things we’ll never know
I...
Know they’re in your heart and soul
Tied up with a bow

Chorus
You gotta change if you wanna
Keep hanging around
You gotta try yeah you gotta
Pick up the pieces
‘Cause we won’t have
No more secrets

oh oh
No more secrets

Verse 2
Haven’t seen you in a while since that day
But I think that everything is okay
Hope you had the courage to stay strong
And you had some help moving on

We tried to care about you
But you never really showed us how to
Then it all just got to much
And we decided that it had to stop

Pre-Chorus
I...
Know you still have things you hide
Things we’ll never know
I...
Know they’re in your heart and soul
Tied up with a bow

Chorus
You gotta change if you wanna
Keep hanging around
You gotta try yeah you gotta
Pick up the pieces
‘Cause we won’t have
No more secrets


Bridge
And every conversation
I couldn’t tell the difference
Between lies or truth
And every single word you said
Was just to confuse
oh oh oh

Chorus (slowly)
You gotta change if you wanna
Keep hanging around
You gotta try yeah you gotta
Pick up the pieces
‘Cause we won’t have
No more

(normal)
You gotta change if you wanna
Keep hanging around
You gotta try yeah you gotta
Pick up the pieces
‘Cause we won’t have
No more secrets

END

Thanks, please comment! :D

Emma xx

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