Never Again Lyrics Critique - Pop Song

by Valerie
(Hong Kong)

Hi, this is my, I don't know, 15th songs or something. I really love writing songs but I don't know if they're good.

Never Again

Everyday I go to school
And I see
Love in evrywhere around
Except the spot I'm at

I've been broken
I've been torn apart
Now I don't want it anymore

In the corridor, against the lockers
In the bathroom, in the closet
Couples making out
Saying loving words to each other
Love is all around

I looked around jealously around the first day
Now I don't even care anymore
Never again
I will never love again

When I looked into your eyes
Used to see
Sparks flying around but now
There is only blankness

I've been broken
I've been torn apart
Now I don't want it anymore

In the corridor, against the lockers
In the bathroom, in the closet
Couples making out
Saying loving words to each other
Love is all around

I looked around jealously around the first day
Now I don't even care anymore
Never again
I will never love again

Will I ever see the sky someday
Will I ever find the sunlight
There's so much more to life than love
I just gotta find that special something

In the corridor, against the lockers
In the bathroom, in the closet
Couples making out
Saying loving words to each other
Love is all around

I looked around jealously around the first day
Now I don't even care anymore
Never again
I will never love again

In the corridor, against the lockers
In the bathroom, in the closet
Couples making out
Saying loving words to each other
Love is all around

I looked around jealously around the first day
Now I don't even care anymore
Never again
I will never love again


I've been broken
I've been torn apart