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Nelli -Pop Lyrics Critique

by Blair
(Maryland, USA)

Ba bum bum bum bum bum
Ha da da da da da

In a day she
Fills her needs
No other point of view
Nothing a skewed
Coming home to
Broken doors
Got money to save
To get hell away

In the haunting wake
She wish to say
Only just to get
Her pack per day

Nelli come back
Couldn?t be alone that way
Called so useless, over used
Just remember cold touch
If you figure out
Don?t scare away
(Nelli Nelli no don?t yell at me, or try to corrupt me, Nelli)

She?s eyes open
To surroundings
What she thought she had
She never knew
And that blanket
Always been used
Covered in red covered in ash
Erase the rash

If I thought I wouldn?t see
Life again maybe I?d be
Rich, and never forget
Silly games that we used to play

Nelli come back
Couldn?t be alone that way
Called so useless, over used
Just remember cold touch
If you figure out
Don?t scare away








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