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My Pretty Liar - Lyrics Critique

by Gabe

My Pretty Liar

Tell me... a story off the top of your head.
You always tell the best little lies.
Sell me... every single feeling that I
Wish you felt when I looked in your eyes.

Just one smile, one more glance,
One more half-hearted dance.
Anything to believe
That you're still here for me.

And tell me... why everything you say
Seems perfectly amazing
Til you walk away.

I don't see... how you could make this right.
You said that we're forever,
But you're leaving me tonight.

Show me... you're something so amazing that I'll
Swear that nothing could ever compare.
And slowly... convince me that i really need you.
All the while hide the fact you don't care.

Give a smile, take a heart,
Just keep playing the part.
Take a bow, don't you know?
You're the star of the show.

So tell me... why everything you say
Seems perfectly amazing
Til you walk away.

I don't see... how you could make this right.
You said that we're forever,
But you're leaving me tonight.

Don't you see
What you do to me
It's amazing... we're amazing.
Set my heart on fire
My pretty liar
Just please don't say it, don't go away yet.

And tell me... why everything you say
Seems perfectly amazing
Til you walk away.

I don't see... how you could make this right.
You said that we're forever,
But you're leaving me.
You're leaving me.

Tell me... how everything you say
Seems perfectly amazing
Til you walk away.

I don't see... how you could make this right.
You said that we're forever,
But you're leaving me tonight.
You're leaving me tonight.

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