My Hero is Always You Lyrics Critique - Pop/Country?

by Kimberly D.
(Weaverville, CA)

This song is titled My Hero is Always You. Im dedicating this song to my Step-Dad. And If I ever get this song recorded I want it to be my Father Daughter Dance at my Wedding. I really want comments on it this song really means alot to me and my other songs on this site too. Please dont be afraid to be harsh.

My Hero is Always You

There you are in my hospital room
I catch my mother in the glimpse of my eyes
but all i really see is you
my mother met you
before i was even thought of
your life was full of brightness and love
it didnt work out with you two
but you still stayed around
Two little boys
that arent even yours
but will always be in your heart
forever, forever
theyre still your sons

Chorus:
Your not my father
but your always there
in the darkness
and in the brightest light
your a father to me
you keep me strong
you keep me safe
teach me right, teach me wrong
always by my side
and always in my way
when i need you there
even though i dont always say it
i wanna say it now
your my dad
i love you
and my hero is always you
my hero (3x)
is always you

Getting knocked around
one more hit
and my mothers on the ground
she attracts the wrong type of men
always getting hurt in the end
one more shot
and shes gonna be gone
you walk in
just as skips about to hit
you knock him out
you defend our mother and us

(Chorus)

Spring comes
and this beautiful little girl pops out
one look into your eyes
and my heart just breaks out
you knew i was destined for greatness
not 2 seconds into my life
you loved me, not even knowing
who i really was
at 5 yrs old
i was told i wasnt yours
you sat me down
and explained to me that i was yours
even though i really wasnt
you told me not to listen to there words
that youd stand up for me
no matter where i was
now its been 20 yrs
and your still there

(Chorus)

You got a call
6 months ago
asking if youd walk me down the asile
and of course you said yes
its my wedding day today
and your standing there
telling me how beautiful i look
well heres something i want you to know
even though your giving me away today
im not really ready for you to let me go just yet
i will always be your little girl
no matter where you are
always be your little girl
no matter where you are

Chorus (2x)