My Goodbye lyrics Critique -Pop song??

by Chelsie
(Minnesota)

I've written some lyrics, but i don't know if they are good. I want some criticism from someone besides my friends! I don't exactly like mine, I think it's too long, and crowded? What do you think I could do to make mine better?

My Goodbye

I loved you last night but today
I'm just not feeling the same
I know there's too much for us
There wouldn't be much for us
Plus I'm trying so hard for you
I've run so many yards
I'm hopeless, lost, and so tired

I just got hit by the reality
No, we weren't meant to be
You'll never be by me
I want you but I've got to know
We're to apart for us to mean
something in each others heart
I'll miss you but I got to go
Baby I gotta leave so it's my goodbye

I've got so many memories
Wishing they were of you and me
Without you my life is catastrophe
Not like you could see it
Either way we couldn't fit together
I have to get over you
You make me so blue
I'm not sure how I'll do
Without you, but I know
I have to get over you

I just got hit by the reality
No, we weren't meant to be
You'll never be by me
I want you but I've got to know
We're to apart for us to mean
something in each others heart
I'll miss you but I got to go
Baby I gotta leave so it's my goodbye

Life should be perfect
And I'd have to say
You're not worth it
When you smile it reminds
me that I'll have to pay

I just got hit by the reality
No, we weren't meant to be
You'll never be by me
I want you but I've got to know
We're to apart for us to mean
something in each others heart
I'll miss you but I got to go
Baby I gotta leave so it's my goodbye

You were so important to me
Everyone else could see it in me
I could stare at you for hours and
knew you didn't compare to anyone
But we have to go our separate ways
Please walk away when I say my last goodbye
I really don't want you to see me cry
Not sure if it'll make me more
happy but you have to go
So it's my last goodbye
I won't say it too fast...
Goodbyee\