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Moving On- By Lisette Archer-Barber- Lyrics Critique

by Lisette Archer-Barber
(Lincolnton, GA)

Verse 1:

We've been though the pain ..
We can see throught the rain..
You were there but now im sittin all alone trying to move on
because we know its gone
We werent suppose to be done
Now just close our eyes as it starts to die
then we realize....

Chorus:
We will never know..
What can happen
We will never know...
What will see
and it breaks my heart...
to say goodbye
But it just has to be...
(3x) Cause we cant do it
no more, we cant do it no more
between me and you

((Thats all i have so far but let me know what you think and im open to any suggestions...THANK YOU!))

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