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"Mirror" Lyrics Critique- Acoustic/Slow Pop

by Marcos
(Cudahy,Los Angeles,CA,USA)

Me(same Guy who Wrote

Me(same Guy who Wrote "You" lol

(Verse:1)
Unrecognizeable,
This picture is a blur
cause you see,what they see
what they want you to see

and they don't even know,
your feeling insecure
they dont care,all they care's
how you dress,what's your style
and if you impress

And Now, Your Stuck
Can't Move, Can't Breathe
can't form a thought
You just Sit, and stare
wondering if the person
staring back is even there

(Chorus)
Reflection's there
But you dont realize it
this face is yours
but you dont recongize it
the thought's are there
but you wont think about it
this Glass Holds truth
but you keep on Denying

You cannot Hide
Forever from yourself
Make all the lies
you want but they wont help
Accept that you
Are perfect have no fear
Make sure you seee
What's true inside the Mirror

(Verse:2)
Deny it All You Want
Fool Everyone Around
Try to hide, from your face'
Look like them, look unfazed
but deep inside
you know the truth
You know what's real, and how you feel
and that soon you'll just have to deal

Nonetheless, why even think?
Something's wrong, With you
When Clearly that aint true
You may be different, but not wrong
Remember What you are's what makes you strong

(Chorus)
Reflection's there
but you don't realize it
this face is yours
but you dont recognize it
the Thought's are there
but you wont think about it
this glass hold's truth
but you keep on denying

You Cannot Hide
Forever From yourself
Make all the lies
You want but they help
Accept that youuu
are perfect have no fear
Make Sure you see
What's true Inside the Mirror

(bridge:)
What's true inside the mirror...
What's true inside the..
What's true inside the...
What's true inside the...

Dont Cry
No matter what they say
They're not worth
Any tears on this day
They just Lie
To make themselves feel
better
They wanna feel Above
You
but dont give them that
pleasure
Just go home and stare
at that beautiful person
I always knew was there.....

(Chorus)
...What's True Inside the Mirror
What's true inside the Mirror
What's true inside the..
What's true inside the...
What's true inside the......
...Mirror...

(the End)
Please Leave Commens and Your Opinion's!!





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"Mirror" Lyrics Critique- Acoustic/Slow Pop

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Jan 25, 2009
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Inspiring!
by: Anonymous

Love this Song! it's really nice!

Jan 26, 2009
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i really like your song
by: Anonymous

this song is so good it reminds me of an experience i had

Feb 13, 2009
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Awesome
by: Jess

I liked it. It wasnt as repetitive as a lot of songs out there, which I liked. It also related to me in a way, so keep it up!

Aug 30, 2009
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Amazing!
by: Gillian

I really want 2 steal this song! Its brilliant! Can I try and make some music for it :)

Aug 31, 2009
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Haha no you cant steal
by: Anonymous

lol im already making music to it
but u can try and send it to me at faithfan12000@yahoo.com

Sep 18, 2009
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makes sense
by: Anonymous

this song is quite appealing it makes sense that this could actually be someone it's basically really really nice and i would find this kinda piece relaxing as i said it makes pure sense as though it's natural

Jan 25, 2011
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:D
by: Kelsey

When I read songs, it's always the good ones I find I can sing to. This is one of those. It's amazing. I'm not going to steal it, but it will be stuck in my head for the rest of the day. Guarunteed. (:


Mar 26, 2011
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Amazing!
by:

I love this song so much, especially the chorus. I feel as if it really is relatable (or you've been sneaking peaks at my diary.)

May 08, 2011
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very well written
by: Casey Allen Harris

That was a very well written song lyrics. Good job!

May 18, 2011
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=) Niice
by: Will

What is the tempo? =)
Cool lyrics. Its great how you've minimized repeating the same content

Jun 29, 2011
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I like it!
by: Anonymous

I like this song! I feel like a lot of people can relate to it!

Aug 19, 2011
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Fantastic!
by: Lauren Laine

I always like songs like this because its a real emotion of feeling insecure and then pulling your self up and being strong. I sat there and sang the lyrics and its a really beautiful song. I looked at the song and got an idea of how it is meant to sound which is really good! Keep up the great work! :) -Much Love, Lauren

Oct 09, 2011
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nice.
by: Teresa

I liked the feet of the song, and the easiness of knowing what u were writing about (some songwriters think its appealing to be over-the-top in obscureness). The song could relate to anyone which is a positive as it aims at a wide audience. It rhymes nicely and doesnt strain anywhere either.
I would work slightly on your chorus though. Its just a little empty compared to the verses and the last '...mirror.' being sang after a pause makes it a little cheesy to me. all in all though, i liked it! :)

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