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Memory Bank- Pop Lyrics Critique

by Blair
(Maryland, USA)

Here she is there she is here she comes
Coming home all alone no new story
She thinks she likes it that way
You see that woman on the street
She wants some money
She thinks she knows you
Pass her by say nothing but
She wants more than just the usual stare
Here he is there he is here he comes
Thought I told him to go
Wish I could turn the clock
Back to that foggy dock
To the both of you
What I said I do not regret
Had to leave that place
Cause I didn’t like my face
Reaching back far for something
Needed help a lookout
What is new
Cave in and out in and out out
I won’t come back, not the blame
Or the game it’s too bad
I’ll be waiting can you be waiting or are you fleeting

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