Memories - Lyrics Critique

I remember
When we were young
I remember
All the fun

Memories
Of u and me
Memories
Of just we

Playin round
All over town
Thought we were gods
Now it seems kinda odd

(chorus)
All our memories
You seem to leave behind
All our memories
I'd liek to turn back the clock and rewind

Make things the way they used to be
SO many memories
I was so happy and free
So many memories

Where did that all go
Mamories
Why do u forget the good times so
Memories
Can we be close again
Liek in my memmories
Like when i felt no pain
Oh the memories

Can we go back
Before my whole world went black
Ill turn back the clock
Before my whole world went black

Ill takee you all with me
To see how i used to be
Youll neve see the real me
SO angry

I remember breathing the soft air
The feeling of the warm sun
Now the air is rough
The sun is cold
Why is all that gone
Its been gone for so long

(Chorus)





(its not done yet but thats what i have so far)