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memories - lyric feedback

by nick mattan
(osaka japan, and chicago illinois USA)

Memories

(intro)

(verse1) You blow me away whenever you smile.
But every time I look back you are always gone.
I wish you’d just stay awhile, but wait, you’re never there.

Memories, there just so far from me now.
Memories, I’m just not fond of them right now.
Memories, is what caused this terror.
Now sit back and stay awhile

(chorus)
If there’s a third world I must be in the second.
Seems I’m neither here nor there.
I’m waiting for what is over.
Or it’s waiting for me.

Memories tear my heart out with anger.
You are the flower that unites my dream with destiny.
A special world for you and me.
A special bond you cannot see.

(verse2)
And though at times a thread may break.
A new one forms in its wake, to bind us closer.
If there’s a third world I must be in the second.
Seems I’m neither here nor there.
Memories tear my heart out with anger.
You be the doctor and sow my heart back together.

(chorus)
Memories, there just so far from me now.
Memories, I’m just not fond of them right now.
Memories, is what caused this terror.
Now sit back and stay awhile

(post chorus)
If there is a third world I must be in the second.
ill cast a fishing line and pull you to my world.
You are the flower that unites my dream with destiny.
A special world for you and me.



Hey guys you can Email me at nick4japan@yahoo.com if you would like to make suggestions/corrections. this is only my 3rd song so it still needs alot of work




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Nov 28, 2008
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Not bad
by: sarah

Just a little more work and ya got it.

Dec 01, 2008
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ok
by: Anonymous

really caught my attention!

Mar 25, 2009
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Sweet
by: Jesse P hrtbrk

That's pretty sweet a little work

May 21, 2009
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Hey
by: yui

Hey i talked to you on friendster.... I found u. I love it. now try to write a song like "cherry" see ya;)^

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