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Mechanical Heart- Lyrics Critique - Electronic/Dance Song

by Rie Torimaru
(Malaysia)

Mechanical heart

INTRO:
(Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Why, why, why)

My mechanical heart
Is as cold as ice
It can be sweet
With a little sugar and spice

Here’s a little warning
You better be nice
And here’s a bit more advice
You better think twice

Oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oo oh oh
My heart can’t pump anymore
Oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oo oh oh
I might as well just hit the dancefloor

I’ll take it you’re the blame for all of this
I’ll take it you’re the name that started this
I’ll take it you’re the blame for
My mechanical heart

My heart’s now
Like a cold machine
Not capable of loving for anything
My mechanical heart is
Full of gears and screws and nuts
I would never love again
Not for a million bucks

My brain is a mess
Along with my dress
So is my heart
Right from the start

Oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oo oh oh
My heart can’t pump anymore
Oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oo oh oh
I might as well just hit the dancefloor

I’ll take it you’re the blame for all of this
I’ll take it you’re the name that started this
I’ll take it you’re the blame for
My mechanical heart

My heart’s now
Like a cold machine
Not capable of loving for anything

My heart’s now
Like a cold machine
Not capable of loving for anything
No matter where
No matter what
You’re always the blame
For my mechanical heart

No matter where
No matter what
You will always the blame
For my mechanical heart

Right now I’m twisted into this way
You can’t change me now
Any day
Right now I’m twisted into this way
You can’t change me now
Any day

I’ll take it you’re the blame for all of this
I’ll take it you’re the name that started this
I’ll take it you’re the blame for
My mechanical heart

My heart’s now
Like a cold machine
Not capable of loving for anything

I’ll take it you’re the blame for all of this
I’ll take it you’re the name that started this
I’ll take it you’re the blame for
My mechanical heart

My heart’s now
Like a cold machine
Not capable of loving for anything





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