marym lyrics critique pop rock - lost

by mari
(united states)

hi plz tell me how to make this better .
LOST

i thught you couldve changed but i guess i always knew the ship was sinking
well i got to tired of thinking how to end the stupid puzzle but love i never knew that was us
and now im hopeless...
i know i could wait for ever so you could make up your mind i know ill find the pieces that
make both of us i use to troath you i used to love you i used to write all my songs about you
but suddenly u changed all ur directions and now ur in the middle of nowhere and so ur lost ur lost my win your loss your loss my win admit you are are just so lost lost ur lonely babey...
shhh keep quite im the riot in this sticky situation u were lying and yet i was buying your crap u were my gideness my suggester that filling in the empty gap but i was blindfolded so i never understood this was a trap

i know i could wait for ever so you could make up your mind i know ill find the pieces that make both of us i use to troath u i use to love you i use to write all my songs about you but suddenly u changed all ur directions and now ur in the middle of nowhere and so ur lost ur lost my win your loss your loss my win admit u are so lost lost ur lonely baby

tired of this mess thx god now im relieved of the stress the danger that u posses over me
ur words are bitter enough of the glitter the lies are getting bigger every day the words that once were sweet they dont meet to my expectations ur over over over hush dont lie were over over hush dont cryyyyyyyyyyyyyy

i know i could wait for ever so you could make up your mind i know ill find the pieces that make both of us i use to troath u i use to love you i use to write all my songs about you but suddenly u changed all ur directions and now ur in the middle of nowhere and so ur lost ur lost my win your loss your loss my win admit u are so lost lost ur lonely baby

enogh i said enough of the story is read time for the next chapter ur actions are jolty so keep on moving on.........