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Making Love To An Empty Heart Lyrics Critique- Pop song

by Marc Spector
(Long Island,New York,USA)

You try to hide,but your tears wont let you go.
Try to understand-I dont want to let you know.
Its not quite the real thing,but its fine for what you want.
Dont you know the pain will eventually break your heart.

You try to scream,but the words dont come out right.
Try to understand I dont wanna start a fight.
If it was the real thing,would it take so long to find?
Dont you know the pain will eventually make you blind?

CHORUS:

MAKING LOVE TO AN EMPTY HEART
MAKING LOVE TO AN EMPTY HEART
Slowly tearing us apart,
MAKING LOVE MAKING LOVE TO AN EMPTY HEART.

You try to fall,but you mind gets in your way.
I dont understand and I cant wait another day.
All the things you meant to me do not mean a thing today.
All that I can see is us getting further and further away.

CHORUS until end




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Making Love To An Empty Heart Lyrics Critique- Pop song

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Nov 18, 2010
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Smooth
by: Charlie

Very nice flow to the lyrics smooth easy to read Good job!

Nov 19, 2010
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good lyrics
by: Anonymous

the lyrics are very good to understand what you trying to tell the listerner.

Nov 25, 2010
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good job
by: Anonymous

Awsome lyrics, easy to understand and easy to sing to.

Nov 29, 2010
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THANKS FOR FEEDBACK
by: Marc Spector

Thank you all for all your nice comments.I really appreciate it.This song is one of my faves.Thanks again!

Dec 26, 2010
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I love the emotion in the words
by: Danierla

You do have a way with words that will resonate with a lot of your listeners. You touch a cord with your words that many people have been to. This song I believe would be very much loved.

Mar 07, 2011
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Good!
by: Anonymous

I love it. It's so sweet and simple.

May 05, 2011
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Flow
by: Don

Great flow brother, keep it up. before you know it someone will want to buy it :)

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