Mackenzie Lyrics Critique - Pop w/ piano, acoustic guitar. kinda fast beat.

by Writer (15yrs old)
(california)

(Verse 1)
I see you and I have to know
What's you're name and where do you go
I send you a smile and
You look down and smile too

You got me wondering-
How, I, can, get you

(Chorus)
I'm thinking about that girl,
Wanting to see her again.
I’m dreaming about this angle,
Wanting to hold her hand.
I'm hoping to kiss her lips,
Wanting to hold her against me...
I have to see this girl,
I want to be with Mackenzie—
Mackenzie, Mackenzie, Mackenzie

(Verse 2)
We pass each other in the halls
Try to speak but my voice just falls
My heart blocks my words coming out
You hide your smile looking down
You got me wondering-
How, I, can, get you

(Verse 3)
Sitting next to you
Thought I saw it in your eyes
A spark deep down inside
Because I think you feel it too
Call me crazy if I’m wrong
But I just got to get next to you
You got me wondering-
How, I, can, get you

(Chorus)
I'm thinking about that girl,
Wanting to see her again.
I’m dreaming about this angle,
Wanting to hold her hand.
I'm hoping to kiss her lips,
Wanting to hold her against me...
I have to see this girl,
I want to be with Mackenzie—
Mackenzie, Mackenzie

(Bridge)
We can go anywhere you like
We can do anything you want
I don't mind as long as I got you
Mackenzie you don't just gotta piece of me
I'm in this, till the very end
You're the one my heart's beating for
It won’t stop…Beating for you—
Beating for you.

You got me wondering-
How, I, can, get you