lyrics to song: Why? - hip hop - lyrics feedback

by Steve

hey everyone. this is like the first song ive written and i was hoping to get some feedback about it. It just feels like its missing something complete it. The third verse isnt finished yet im working on that at the moment. its an up tempo song with a good solid beat

Why don’t you feel the way I do, about you?
I thought I wasn’t ready, I thought my heart was to heavy, I thought I needed more time, then I met you, it was then that I knew, I need to know if you feel it too
Why don’t you feel the way I do, about you?
Can’t you feel the same things I do for you?
I’ll be there when it’s all unfair and no one else seems to care
I’ll be there when it’s all unfair; I’m telling you the truth
She said she wasn’t ready, she said her heart was too heavy she told me she needed more time I said that’s fine, I’ll wait in line, cuz I want you to be mine
This feeling isn’t new and I can’t just let it brew so
You are the one I’m going to pursue; I’m telling you the truth
This is my dilemma, when am I going to tell her? That I want me to be her fella