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"lyrics" critique rock

by Rachel
(Maryland)

I cant figure out a song title for this : ((( But anyway, please tell me if you like the song or not : )))
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Take my heart
Its not worth the fight
When things just never seem to go right
Take it apart
Just walk away
I wont say anything
Take it far
It wont be long
Until i realize i cant go
Without these feelings of exhileration

Just walk away
Everything will be ok
Silently we will surrender
To the path we have endeavored
This lifeless art of striving to be remembered

I thought I could take another step
This path less taken has its regrets
I try to find my way around
Im lost, I cant seem to find my ground
Its easier said than done
To be different from everyone

Just walk away
Everything will be ok
Silently we will surrender
To the path we have endeavored
This lifeless art of striving to be remembered

Just take one more step
You need another discretion
Make it worth the while
Abandonment is not an intention
It just takes one more step
To realize your not alone

Just walk away
Everything will be ok
Silently we will surrender
To the path we have endeavored
This lifeless art of striving to be remembered




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Feb 21, 2010
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by: Victoria Abdul

Hey! I think that this is a great song! They title should be "Walk Away".... :)

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