Lyrics critique Pop/Rock- Wish you were here

by AshleyWosh
(Brazil)

Uhh..Simple song..my friend dies a couple of years ago and she was everything to me...but she's gone..and I couldn't help but write a song for her..it's personal..and idk if it's good..but be Honest..tks

Wish you were here

You made me smile
when I wanted to cry
you held my hand and led me through the darkness
to the light

You said I'd have to hold on
that I should be strong
but you never told me you'd be gone
and now I'm alone and don't know where to go

oh,wish you were here
wish you were here

Oh,what I wouldn't give
to have you right here by my side
You taught me what's wrong
and what's right (CHORUS)
you showed me the right way
said the right words
you said ''it's alright to make mistakes
and everybody hurts''

Underneath this smile
I'm dying
can't get you off my mind
but I'm trying
It's a struggle everyday
so I'm fighting
there's a battle here within
and I don't think I'll ever win..

your face haunts me like a ghost
right now is when I'm needing you the most..
ohhh

(chorus)

You were always there for me
but now you ain't nowhere near
so I'm just looking at your photograph
wishing you were here
wish you were here