Lyrics critique - No title as yet

by Dannie M.
(West Virgina)

i dont know what the title would be yet

Jump, jump
as high as you can
theyll never reach you when youre high in the sky
out of their reach
you dont need them
no not anymore

if you gotta leave then go
but jsut rememebr to jump
jump as high as you can
up in the sky
where no one can reach you
or make you feel like _
when you had been feeling so high
from the greattimes you had before
the downward spiral
will never occure again
theyll never be able to reach
you again

one day god will give us all wings
all us sinners
who have screamed in frustrations
and cried in agony
from their own inner pain...