Lyrics critique - idk title yet either

by Dannie M.
(west virgina)

Will there ever be a lover
that is also your friend?

will there ever be a father
that stays til the end?

i dont know but somewhere out there
theres got to be
someone out there
who is the perfect man

well i know ive got alotta years to go
but the searching starts now

to figure out and dream up someone
and it seems theyll nver be found

way out there in a world
where nothings broken
is the the perfect man

a lover whos also your friend
and will be a father who stays til the end..

hes the perfect man...