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Title: Unknown Lyrics Feedback/critque-Alternative rock
    
another song wriiten by my friend Wade Patry. He has been on a writing storm latley, anyway just wondering what other people thought about this song. It'...
When You Get There - lyrics critique
    
Hi. I wrote this for my 8-year-old daughter, who is certain she will be among the first group of astronauts to travel to Mars. And you know what? I pretty ...
Do you remember lyrics critique
    
hey this is my first song so I hope ya all like it
Do you remember the first time we met i didn't know you nor would i forget I thought that i should ...
I'd Do Anything (Lyric idea. Need help!!)
    
This is a song I'm writing for my grandpa. A couple years ago, he almost died and so I'm writing a song about it. I've got one line for the first verse ...
Saying Goobye - Lyrics Critique
    
Verse 1: So there we were sitting by the bay. Thinking about what we had to say. saying goodbye was my foremost regret. by myself watching the sun ...
Heros- Lyrics Critique- country- by Lonnie
    
Here's a song I wrote about two family members. A lot of songs are just made up stories but this one is very real. The first verse is about my 12 year ...
Guitars That Won't Stay in Tune- Lryric critique -country -by Lonnie
    
Let me know what you think. Be rough I can handle it. Thats the only way I can get better
Guitars That Won't Stay In Tune
You can bitch and gripe ...
BEST SERMON EVER SEEN Country lyrics by Charlie in Alabama
    
Best Sermon Ever Seen
He never failed to give When someone was in need I’d seen him work with his bare hands Until his hands would bleed He was ...
Breaking The Silence lyrics critique- pop punk/emo
    
V1: On the warm nights, when we felt that way
All the cold sweats, that we had that day
On the drive home, that we just could not explain
To the ...
Nerds of the World Lyrics Critique
    
Girls we all go for the same type of guy the jocks the rockstars the dreamy eyes well i say it's time for a change soooooo
Heres to the nerds the ...
Stood With my Back to the Wind - Lyrics Critique
    
I grew up a drifter my eyes on the rainbow with colors that fade in the rain dreams of the highway that came to me nightly I tried to resist but ...
Im So Sorry Lyrics Critique-Kate Carlon(Please dont steal)-Pop/Rock
    
Verse 1: I've Written them down a time or two, But I just cant find the words to say to you, I'm sorry things ended the way they did, But don blame ...
Nora Lyrics critique- Soul
    
I am a total beginner so feel free to rip me to shreds.I know this needs a ton of work
"The easy target"
Rueful looks, I never seem to forget The ...
"My Life So Far - Pop/Punk" - Lyric Critique
   
This is the story of my life I gotta worn you it is a fight But there are still a lot of challenges ahead I couldn?t make it without my true friends ...
Speechless lyrics critique
   
This is a song I wrote about this guy at school that I have a crush on. Lemme know whatcha think. Advice or suggestions for changes welcomed/appreciated ...
Tired - Lyrics Critique
   
okay this one is not a typical song it doesnt really have a structure but it means alot...
Tired
My eyes are open under these sheets, My body feels ...
Stutter - Lyrics Critique
   
this tension plucks my hair like tightly wound guitar strings and every time I push Im pulled back and Im trying to breathe
and the smell gets stronger ...
Things Will Be Better Tomorrow - Rock - Lyrics Critique
   
so i made this song up for my band and i need honest feedback on it thanks guys!
As you bear a burden of what used to be as your are mending your shattered ...
A little to late. Lyrics Critique- Love kinda song.
   
A little late: It’s the middle of summer chilling with friends, having a good ole time you walked through those doors like a wave hitting the shores ...
At The Gates Lyrics Critique- Metal song
  
At The Gates (Written By Martin Synan)
This is a song I wrote about The Lord Of The Rings
(Slow intro)
There is a day when the world of men will ...
flashback - lyrics critique
  
Could people please comment on this one i am only young and just been writing for about 6-7 months please could someone feedback on this. the first bit ...
Blue Tonight Lyric Critique - Pop Ballad
  
Gave you everything you wanted Gave you nothing that you need Like a mighty oak tree you stood tall and strong But I cut you down and watched you bleed ...
Looking out My Window Lyric Critique-folks song
  
Looking out my window, my back against the wall, I hear thunder and I wonder when the rain is gonna fall.
Looking out my window, skies dark as ...
Dream lyrics Critique - RnB/ soul
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I had that dream again The one with you and me The one where i had found you And you were in my reach
Yours arms open wide Standing in the distance ...
Afraid of Waking - lyrics critique- Rock song
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“Afraid of Waking”
Verse#1
I’m so afraid of waking from this dream
Life is full of heartache and fear I’m so afraid please don’t shake me
Why ...
"Think About You" - Alternative - Lyrics Critique
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Walking by you, It's the first day. I never know the right words to say. You say one word, maybe two. but I never thought I'd lose sleep because of ...
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Okay--so, basically this song is pretty self-explanatory. i know that this isn't very good, but i'm a beginner. i'm only 13:). help me out? constructive ...
All Mine-lyrics critique Rock
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This is my first song enjoy it:
Verse 1:
Since the first time I saw you I can´t get you out of my head Girl, I think you are the one Oh baby ...
'Every Time' Lyrics Critique Acoustic/Pop
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(Verse one) Every time, it’s something else, You never take responsibility. You think it’s wrong because we’re friends But what matters is how it ...
Breathe- Lyrics Critique-
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So this is the first song that i have written. i still feel like i should work on it . this is has like a slow/spacey acoustic sound lol . tell me what ...
Through with you- adult alternative- lyrics critique
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(1st verse) You have to be the one to tell me About all the things i didn't know What are the answers to my questions Tell me the direction I should ...
In Her Eyes Lyrics Critique- Alternative rock or Rock
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My friend wrote this song for our band. We don't have the music yet but that's a working progress. I'm the lead guitar and lead vocals and I was wondering ...
It Even Snows in Mexico- Pop Lyrics Critique
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Mexico Mex Mex Mexico Mexico Mex Mex Mexico Mexico Mex Mex Mexico I think it pours in Mexico
Hot press and I got my finger to your chest Regret ...
Self Centred Woman - Lyric Critique
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It's a typical situation every saturday night They never ask u politely, always talkin real shite Never show you respect, got they're impressions of ...
"Hard Life Lyrics Critique - Alternative and Punk"
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Im 17 years old and my girlfriend of 10 months dumped me for one of my friends and i just started writing songs two weeks ago so please tell me what you ...
Help me on the title! Lyrics Critique - Rock/Screamo Song
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Note: all CAPS are screams.
(VER1) The subtle signs are what give you away With every breath, I hear you screaming silently I look into your eyes ...
Go! Robbie Go! By Robbie Rohr and Dave Badham - Lyrics Critique
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Go! Robbie Go! By Robbie Rohr and Dave Badham
V1) D Start my day at flag raisin`, G Inspiration's what I'm saying`, D ...
Rainbow Chaos Lyrics Critique - unknown genre
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A girl stands alone in the dusk of the morn she bequeaths her life to the end of the world One last melody she decides to sing to the world Mixing memory ...
"CHANCES" BALLAD - SCOTT - Lyric Feedback
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written to try and inspire those with doubts, those who cannot lift themselves from the floor... we all go there sometimes.
CHANCES
For ...
Just writting some stuff off the top of my head to see what you guys think
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so you're out with your friends seems you forgot me again and its hard to know you'd rather be there
and now I'm home all alone just waitin here ...
Arrogance For Ars* Heads Lyrics - pop punk/pop rock
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im looking for critique on lyrics suggestions/revisions and 1-5 system
You've got a giant god complex for a religious guy i wonder how you got you'...
Let Her Be -Lyrics Critique -Acoustic
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I always try to prove to you that I can be something that you won't regret,but whats the sense in that? I'll keep trying and I'm so sure you won't ...
Santa Clause don't come down the Chimney - Charlie-- Country Lyric Crtique
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1st draft It is too long It is too sad what do you think?
1st verse We tell our children Everyday, Believe in God We teach them how ...
lost (lost without u) - lyric critique
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chorus lost (lost without u) lost (lost without u) im lost verse 1 being lost without u is like a battle ive just lost no one ther to love me the ...
hmmm...not sure yet - lyric critique
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ok..... so far i've only come up with a bridge and a chorus, i've written it for my cd production class so it might be reccored and put on a cd.
Chorus....
"Prison walls", country song, lyrics critique please
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I tried for so long to do The best that I could But in the end I knew that I would
I turned to a life Of robbin and stealin I didn’t care about ...
Will I Be To Late lyrics critique- acoustic lyrics feedback
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V1: Ashes to ashes they all fall around me, Turning from ou to pick them back up. Stop the abuse its tying my arms down, The fate of my life its all in ...
Meant to be Lyrics Critique - classic rock/Country
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Be as harsh as need be pls..., this song is for my GF and i will be playing at the hard rock hotel and casino for her.
Verse 1 As I watch this ...
Gabrielle Lyrics Critique - Rock/Pop Song
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I am looking for not a rough critique but not a soft critique either. I have a band but I am nothing but the song writer. So could you please critique ...
Nelli -Pop Lyrics Critique
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Ba bum bum bum bum bum Ha da da da da da In a day she Fills her needs No other point of view Nothing a skewed Coming home to Broken doors Got ...
Memory Bank- Pop Lyrics Critique
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Here she is there she is here she comes Coming home all alone no new story She thinks she likes it that way You see that woman on the street She wants ...
Picture Frame - Lyrics Critique
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Pictures in a frame While I stumble down the stairs Locked up tight, afraid what’s not inside Indulge myself with what I have Try to find a person ...
Cover Story- Pop Lyrics Critique
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Making the page on a Sunday day Thinking no one’s there Surprise they got you good You just made your page Accident was not the case Cover your eyes ...
Choking Silence - Lyrics Critique
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A day like no other when you shine on me Like the brightest star You lead me through this life
But now the time is over You had to go Using the ...
Dream It Lyrics Critique- R&B/Pop Song"
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Verse;If you want love (then go for it) If you want Fame (then reach for it) If you Dream big (then dream it, but if u dream it u gotta believe it)...
"Ride or Die Lyrics Critique -R&B Song"
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This is the first verse & Chorus i came up with please tell me what you think!! Be Honest!
Ride Or Die (Intro-talking) You know i've been thinking,...
Performer or Normal Lyrics Critique - Pop Song
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I get on with life as a performer, I'm a competitive kinda person. I like singing all the time, I like dancing during the week. I like to complement ...
"Let It Be Dear Lord, Let It Be" lyrics critique Love Ballad
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Through this world of storm and strife you bring peace into my life. It brings me joy to be your wife. With your strength, stand by me. Stand by me....
The Last Thing I Need - Lyrics Critique
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It's over now I'm leaving and then she turned to go our time together haunts me like a name I used to know. When darkness falls in silence I see in ...
no title (yet) lyrics critique-pop? song
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brand new...still rough around the edges. please rate what we got so far...
Verse 1: Now I'm in disguise Just walking right by So no one can see ...
Eyes to the sky---Rock/Pop lyrics critique
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She said while Im stuck rollin with these pretty eyes Im gonna run around and hang with all those fancy guys got no time for trash like you just sitting ...
"This Darkness" - rock- Lyrics Critique
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Awaken a dream Take away my pain Hold me close to you Never run away
I call for you From out of this darkness Reach in pull me through When ...
Hail To Fire Lyrics Critique- Metal song
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Hail to Fire (written by Martin Synan)
(Intro)
Hail to fire!!! (scream)
(thrash riff)
Hail to Fire Prayers of Death Your time is up And ...
On Your Way - Scott Lyrcis Critique, slow rock, alternative
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Are you happy with your life? Fed up telling silly lies It’s time to take some time to think You are making yourself ill There are places you can go ...
"Tired"? Lyrics Critique- Rock
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I've got lots of lyrics for songs, just trying to put them together finally. Tell me what you think. You don't have to be nice. I'd rather have good criticism ...
army of one -lyrics critique
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army of one fighting for my only true love army of one Fightin for my only true love I miss u soo But I aint givin up
Why chu go Left ...
I'm Sorry Lyrics Critique
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chorus I'm sorry I'm sorry for all the things that I've put you through o please o please please don leave i need you (love you) x2
verse 1 ...
I dont wan't to be- lyrics critique -r&b
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1st verse
I want to make love to you one last time I want to undress you slowly and take my time I want to wrap my arms around your hips then ...
in the dark lyrics for critique unsure of genre
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Hi guys this is my 1st post, ive written a few lyrics but cannot read or play any music so unsure if this would work as a song, comments greatly appreciated....
Rowan's Lyrics Critique
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Hey, my lyrics are for alternative rock songs, it's upbeat, fun. So tell me honestly what you think.
The suns burning brightly but not for long....
OUT OF CONTROL country Lyrics Critique By Charlie from Alabama
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He was her man So with the back of his hand He would remind her time after time He?d watch the miles on her car If she drove too far It would drive ...
OBAMA SAVE ME! - Lyrics Critique
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Written by Charlie in Alabama
You could say I’ve had some bad luck. Well, where do I begin? I‘...
Kiaras lyric critique - love song
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Maybe if I stop pretending it would be alright I cant express this feeling I cant speak my mind And they tell me just talk about it I cant just talk ...
I;'m Not In The Picture Anymore Charlie Country Lyrics Critique
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I’m not in the picture anymore
I said, hey bartender, Can I pay my tab? He said “sure thing buddy, Can I call you a cab?” As I opened my wallet,...
This thing called fate - lyric feedback
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All alone , I spent my day
Hoping that you'd come way
But I just don't wanna be that girl who waits
on someone who won't come and find her someday ...
untittled so far (incomplete) lyrics critique - punk rock/rock
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Im new at this and i dont think im very good but im trying. please give me some feed back.
i ran out the door and got in my car engine wouldnt start ...
between my years critique- rock song
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Do u feel dead to me Do you feel humble Don’t try to hide from me Or your walls will crumble
Make your wings known To all that it can Be Fall into ...
New York Lullaby Lyrics Critique - Australia
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New York Lullaby is a true story that I was inspired to write after meeting "tommy", homeless since returning from the Vietnam war, in Washington Square ...
Better Off, Pop/Rock - Lyric Critique
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Hey, so right now with this song i've been playing it with an acoustic guitar. I've been detating speeding it up and turning it into more of a pop/rock ...
Oh I Wonder - Lyrics Critique
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I'm a beginer. And this is one of my first songs. Maybe the lyrics are kinda childish or stupid but they mean a lot for me. And I want to know others opinions....
broken heart (yours or mine) - lyrics critique
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(im still working on this plz leave some comments and give me tips)
Broken Heart (Yours Or Mine)
This broken heart whose could it be, does it belong ...
When I Miss You Lyrics Critique - Ballad
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This is a very personal song for me, but i kept the person annonomous. It may need a lot of work because i'm young.
Verse 1: Why does he Say that ...
stronger - pop song - lyrics critique
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i see the sky shining oh so bright tonight i understand were i will be tonight not with you but with me
i dont need you any more i don't see you ...
rae lyrics critique-contempory song
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He said he loved like he never loved He said he cared liked he never cared He said he’d love me till the end He said he’d care for me till then
I ...
D.slickness Lyrics Critique - soft rock
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friends by D.slickness. Verse 1. We all have friends we don't wanna lose but what if they, what if they choose to go a different way or ...
"Manipulating" lyrics critique "Pop Song"
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I'm done this over and over again cause i don't stop it from happening i believe that you'll change and i fall for the game cause you're so manipulating ...
marked - lyric critique
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every day i see your face and i realize your just a dream i will never reach if only i could hold on a little longer maybe i would get to see the mark ...
the individual - lyrics critique
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Verse1: just sit back and hear me out This is a tale we all know about I just keep it simple don’t wanna have to shout Some may disagree yet I don’...
You and I - R&B, pop, anythin really - lyrics critique
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its called you and i, i hope u guys like it. im trying to see who might be intersted in making this a real song. i've contacted record producers etc.
chorus ...
beautiful lyrics critique - rock
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some words unspoken some things left undone some feelings unexpressed but you're so graceful that i must say so
your eyes are hopeful full of ...
I'll Still be Loving You Ballad critique
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When reality is no longer a dream. When forever is no longer long. I'll still be loving you.
when laughter is no longer laughter and pain is no longer ...
Julia Lyrics Critique - Blue Ballad
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Here for me (dedicated to every girl’s impossible love)
Chorus: Oh, why can’t you be here for me? I shouldn’t tell you that I love you ‘Cause we’...
But What If... Lyric Critique
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Hey this is my first song so dont rip me too bad, i was gonna make it into a rock song Any feedback can also be sent to footballfan634@gmail.com
If ...
Brave Fighter Lyrics Critique
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I am a brave fighter, trying to overcome my fears. Laughing out loud is the way I shed my tears.
I am a brave fighter cos my weakness I must overcome....
Its a crazy world critique - rock song
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Its a crazy world, driving too fast in the fast lane. its a crazy world, make me feel like going insane.
Its a crazy world, look around. its a ...
My Life, Rock, Lyrics Critique
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Verse 1 I've been here waiting For someone to sweep me off my feet I am depleading I'm not quite sure what I need Verse 2 I feel ...
"Dead" Pop Lyrics Critique
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Okay so this is only my third song, so I'm still a beginner and I'm 11, so it's not the best. This song is about my best friend, he believes in the rumor ...
Dream Girl to Nightmare - Rock Lyrics Critique
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Verse (one line should take about one second)
I have a problem I can't feel you near me Only my broken heart
I feel like I'm dyin' I can't stop ...
Untitled Lyrics Critique - Goth/Rock
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Written a while ago, always liked it. Needs Improvement, What do you think?
I feel your eyes burning through my skin I feel your breath on the wind ...
We All Fall Down Lyrics Critique - Power Ballad?
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Wrote this a while back after going through some stuff. What do you think?
It's the strangest feeling, like diving down into emptiness. Just to ...
Timeless Tragedy Lyrics Critique - Unfinished/Undecided genre
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Half the man he has to hide Half of him is trapped inside The shelter of dark hides him away In this prison he must stay
When the day breaks, the ...
I'm Not Cinderella - acoustic - lyrics feedback
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i wrote this song for my music assignment and would like to know what people think before i submit it :)
Once upon a time, when nursery rhymes seemed ...
Memories - Lyrics Critique
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I remember When we were young I remember All the fun
Memories Of u and me Memories Of just we
Playin round All over town Thought we were ...
"Solar Eclipse" Lyrics Critique - Indie
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There was this old watch his grandpa gave to him he broke it somehow i can't remember well, she gave it back to him managed to repair oh, how thankful ...
Catfishin' lyrics critique
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It aint finished yet i just got the idea for it ummm... as you can see its the first verse and the chorus so just let me know what ya'll think
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Flat screen - Lyric Critique
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I want it to be a great song but i dont have the musical instruments and its a fast pop, rock kinda song! let me know what you think?? you can email me ...
Happy Ending - Lyrics Critique
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Is it you, the one that I have loved The one God sent me from above And have I found the man of my dreams
Now I don’t know where ...
Why be here? lyrics critique - soft, sad kinda sound
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needs a bit o work. any ideas would b HUGELY appreciated =]
I'm so messed up. And i don't know why. My thoughts and actions. Fell short of who I am....
Dissapointment lyrics critique
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ok well dis is actually a poem i wrote last year but someone said it myt make a good song. Not so sure so just wanting some feedback bout what u think ...
block me tonight lyrics critique- sad pop song
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V1. You can’t block my path as I’m walking down the street yeh, you can’t block me as I’m gunna cross the road ‘uh oh, your not gunna block me tonight ...
For a friend lyrics critique- sad pop song
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verse 1 this is for a friend, that, makes you feel like you could acheve, what ever your dreams tell you, this could be something imposible, but ...
Bobby (Bonnie Lyrics Critique - jazzy/folk song)
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Something I wrote a while ago so, tell me what you think.
Bobby get out of the fire tonight Oh You keep me burning and my mouth is dry It's like waiting ...
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