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Lyric Writing - Critique

What do you think of this lyric constructive criticism, advice what u think please ?

Chorus

I love you with all my heart
You will always be a part
Of me forever and for eternity
I wondered who stole my
Heart from me

Chorus
The kisses and the cuddles
Make it all worthwhile
Every time we meet
My heart skips a beat

When I am not with you
All I really wanna do
Is be with you
Sitting by my side
Lying on your soft skin

Chorus

The goodbyes
Are always the hardest
When I say goodbyes
To you I can always
See the sadness and
The love in your eyes

Forever you will be mine
Let’s Share the wine
Yes Gorgeous I do love you
With all my heart
Nobody can get in the way of our love

Chorus x 2



By Helen Edwards




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Jul 15, 2010
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by: Anonymous

I really thought it was sweet and there were good rhymes.

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