Luck Lyrics Critique- Acoustic Song

by Chase
(Pennsylvania, USA)

This is one of the first songs I've ever written. I'm not quite sure yet if I am satisfied with the lyrics of the song or not. Any advice or critiques would be helpful.


(Verse 1)
eleven eleven is a myth, what we have is real.
rabbit's feet can't show you, what I really feel.
four leaf clovers can't tell you that I'm happy.
you don't need any luck, you already have me,

to yourself, and I know,
that I'm the lucky one,
and I want to show
you,
that

(Chorus)
you never need to wish on a shooting star,
cause I will be there where ever you are.
no you dont need to rely on astrology,
cause in the end it will be you and me.
to make it through, cause I love you.
you know its true, that I love you.

(Verse 2)
you know my lucky number, you know that it is two.
the reason for that is, it stands for me and you.
even if I was blind, or shattered every mirror.
the love that we share, I could never see clearer,

than right now, and I know,
that I'm the lucky one,
and I want to show
you,
that

(Chorus)
you never need to wish on a shooting star,
cause I will be there where ever you are.
no you dont need to rely on astrology,
cause in the end it will be you and me.
to make it through, cause I love you.
you know its true, that I love you.

(Verse 3)
sometimes I believe, that you are my lucky charm.
being away from you, nothing else would cause more harm.
im not sure how I would survive, if we had to be apart.
the only thing I really want is a place in your heart,

to myself, and I know,
that I'm the lucky one,
and I want to show
you,
that

(Bridge)
I will never let you go,
and my heart will always love you so.
with you its like a royal flush,
I can't be beat, and you're my rush.
my heart beat is always so fast,
I wish this feeling could forever last.
on my red dice, could you please blow?
id be lucky if you could know,
that

(Chorus)
you never need to wish on a shooting star,
cause I will be there where ever you are.
no you dont need to rely on astrology,
cause in the end it will be you and me.
to make it through, cause I love you.
you know its true, that I love you.

its true.