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Love's Rhythm Lyric Critique

by Lexie

Verse 1: He apologized that night
Begged for my forgiveness
When he looked at me
With those eyes
How could I say anything but
Yes, how could I say no?
Was I supposed to look away?
Turn the other cheek and say

Chorus: It’s easier said than done
Falling out of love
My heart beats to it’s own drum
Can’t control it, ohh can’t do nothing
But listen to the rhythm

Verse 2: I gave in to fear that night
And hoped I wouldn’t regret this
I just closed my eyes and prayed
To God, what have I done?
There’s nowhere to run
We fought it out look who’s won

Chorus: It’s easier said than done
Falling out of love
My heart beats to it’s own drum
Can’t control it, ohh can’t do nothing
But listen to the rhythm

Bridge: Close our eyes
Quiet down
Listen for
A broken vow
Broken silence on the wind
Of your breath
It pulls me back
In

And when I went home that night
I sat and cried
Broke down so I shut my eyes

Chorus: It’s easier said than done
Falling out of love
My heart beats to it’s own drum

It’s easier said than done
Falling out of love
My heart beats to it’s own drum
Can’t control it, ohh can’t do nothing
But listen to the rhythm
ohh can’t do nothing


Check out the link to hear the melody: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7EMeCDfu6xU






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Nov 21, 2010
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Brilliant
by: Anonymous

Love, love, LOVE this one. The lyrics are well written and I can clearly understand where you're coming from. Keep up the excellent work! Oh and you have a beautiful voice as well :)

Nov 22, 2010
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by: Anonymous

this is pretty good actually :)
i didn't listen to the melody but i really like the lyrics :)

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