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Lovers Pop R&B soft rock - lyrics critique

by James Cook
(Viet nam)

lovers
I know that i, I know that we, and could we be lovers,
How could their be any other lover.......

I know that i, I know that we, and could we be lovers,
how could their be any other lover.......

Like a river needs water,
and baby when you cry you need a shoulder,
and when you have hard times you need a saver,
and when its winter you pray for summer,
and when its storm you need shelter, a place you can call your home

I know that i, i know that we, and could we be lovers,
How could their be any other lover.........

I know that i, i know that we, and could we be lovers,
How could their be any other lover.......

I been around world, London to Japan, New York ,to Paris France....
I never felt like this before, I never held someone i truly adore,
What more could any man ask for.

Lovers o lovers

I know that i, I know that we, and could we be lovers
How could their be any other lover......

Like a river needs water, and Baby when you cry you need shoulder,
and when its hard times you need a saver, and when its winter you prayer
for summer, and when its a storm you need shelter, a place you can call your home...

By James Cook




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Lovers Pop R&B soft rock - lyrics critique

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Jan 06, 2010
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Sound like a Maxwell song!!
by: Anonymous

This could be a Maxwell 0r Carl Thomas song, The lyrics are really easy and it has pretty good hook, I think you need to put a chorus on this song.

Jay wright!!

Mar 21, 2010
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pretty good
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