love or a trend lyrics critique

by adam schaub
(peru illinois ( 100 miles fom chicago))

a little song i wrote dont konw if is should be rock or old style pop???



verse 1: Theres something i cant seem to rid from my mind so i think ill write it out in a song ohh i hit the bong at night cuz my nerves are tight when i relize it the only thing i do to get away from youhooo

Chours: i get drunk in your presence my heart jumps up and down like i snorted cocain right off of my sleve escape from reality like a dream and i wonder is it love or a trend this thought is one i cant bend words slip from my mouth i trip when i walk is it love or a trend this thought is one i cant bend

verse 2:im starin right at my jeans and there ripped knees that you gave me when we wrestled out on the yard but any more it seems theres a bar between us it wont even budge i remember carying you though the mud n afterward you dug yourself into me it was at that party we first kissed n ill be damned if it wasnt the best time i ever had is it love or a trend this thought is one i cant bend

chours: i get drunk in your presence my heart jumps up and down like i snorted cocain right off of my sleve escape from reality like a dream and i wonder is it love or a trend this thought is one i cant bend words slip from my mouth i trip when i walk is it love or a trend is thought is one i cant bend

verse 3: well ohhh ho ohhh ho your friends said it was a means to an end youd broken down as a knight i was waitin to give you a crown but i would give anything to relive that night it was so long ago in our lives 2 years have past and your almost gone i relize that we were kids but when you leave so do my dreams i just cant belive it didnt mean any more to you or did you make the decision to soon is it love or a trend this thought is one i cant bend

Chours: i get drunk in your presence my heart jumps up and down like i snorted cocain right off of my sleve escape from reality like a dream and i wonder is it love or a trend this thought is one i cant bend words slip from my mouth i trip when i walk is it love or a trend this thought is one i cant bend

veres 4: sooo ho with your last night in town would you like to go out well party with the old crowd it is so sad that we all spit apart i just ask for one more time and hope you will listen to this song is it love or a trend this thought is one i cant bend i just ask for one last time and hope you will listen to this song cuz i cant get this outa my mind is this love or is it a trend this thought is one i cant bend