Lost Love Critique - Country

by Alex and Addie
(Missouri, USA)

The verses are about medium speed, and the chorus is a little faster.

Depressed
Obsessed
Love is lost
What is the cost?
Nothing can heal it
Just that one bit
The scar will stay
Why isn't it okay?

I was so hopeful you would be the one
Now I know that day will never come
You are you, I am me
We will never be

Lead me away
And please don't stay
because the girl who hides
Underneath might finally
Get the courage to break out
Then you'll see
The girl who fell,
Hard and fast
For the boy who wouldn't slow down long enough
To listen
To the teary eyed girl at the door
to the teary eyed girl at the door

Shattered
Battered
Even when I catch your eye
It's like saying goodbye
I know you don't want me
It just can’t be
Your heart will never be mine
Like a light that will never shine

I was so hopeful you would be the one
Now I know that day will never come
You are you, I am me
We will never be

Lead me away
And please don't stay
because the girl who hides
Underneath might finally
Get the courage to break out
Then you'll see
The girl who fell,
Hard and fast
For the boy who wouldn't slow down long enough
To listen
To the teary eyed girl at the door
to the teary eyed girl at the door

Depressed
Obsessed
I loved you...