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lost (lost without u) - lyric critique

by daquan smith
(30 debevoise apt 7g ,brooklyn,ny,usa)

chorus
lost (lost without u)
lost (lost without u)
im lost
verse 1
being lost without u is like a battle ive just lost no one ther to love me the right way theres no one that will treat me the way u do the way u treat me like no other girl would treat
chorus
lost (lost without u)
lost (lost without u)
im lost

verse
without u I cant breath if im the heart your my pumping to stay alive i guess what im trynna say is your my girl your minne i love in cherish u

chorus
lost (lost without u)
lost (lost without u)
im lost

lost, lost, lost without u (rpt til song fades)




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great song

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