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'Losers' Hall of Fame" lyrics critique - slow three chord country

by Lonnie
(North East Louisana)


Losers Hall of Fame

Did you see the big deal that went on in town last night
They were handing out awards for the deads in your life
It sure did surprize me when they called my name
Last night I was inducted into the losers hall of fame

For all the years I've wasted for the hell I've been thur
For all the tears I've cried since I lost you
For all the miles walking and calling out your name
It's got me a place forever in the losers hall of fame

A place where I will never lose the blues
Where people point thier fingers at the biggest fools
I'll live my life forever with my head bowed in shame
Cause I'm a life time member of the losers hall of fame

The juke box plays the records that hang upon my wall
But losing you has brought me my biggest fame of all
I'm a living legen in a world of tears and pain
And my heart will hang forever in the losers hall of fame

A place where I will never lose the blues
Where people point thier fingers at the biggest fools
I'll live my life forever with my head bowed in shame
Cause I'm a life time member of the losers hall of fame

Monday, July 14, 2008 Lonnie Welch
silver eagle music 1987




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'Losers' Hall of Fame" lyrics critique - slow three chord country

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Aug 19, 2009
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WOW
by: Charlie

Now I'm a fan good stuff!!

Oct 15, 2009
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Awsome
by: Anonymous

I love this. These lyrics are so original, very well written, you're a great writer!

Oct 24, 2009
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Cool
by: Anonymous

Good job.

Oct 27, 2009
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great
by: Anonymous

I like the way the words flow, great stuff

Oct 29, 2009
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amazing!
by: Anonymous

My new favorite song!!! NICE JOB!!!!!!!

Oct 31, 2009
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great
by: Anonymous

Great song that should be on the radio as we speak.

Nov 28, 2009
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very unique
by: Akilina Merel Koralie

love the originality. i like how you used the term "hall of fame" and made it unique by putting in "losers" which is the opposite of what people think of the hall of fame. i can hear some guy singing it now. you stayed on topic and got the message of how being a loser made you famous. it keeps me interested.
you obviously practiced and did your homework on lyric writing. there is nothing that i can think of. this may even have potential as a hit song.

Dec 29, 2009
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catchy!
by: jessica

i love it i can imagine it beign played on the radio and me dancing along to it! Its really clever!!

Mar 13, 2010
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cool
by: Anonymous

good job

Aug 31, 2010
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I really liked this song!!!!!
by: Joshua Rhodes

Perfectly executed! The only thing I would change if it were me I would take out the chorus and make the verse that starts off "For all the years I've wasted and the hell that I've been thru" the chorus. Amazing song!!!!

Nov 22, 2010
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twangy feel... brilliant
by: Kayla

I really love the follow of this song. It defintely has a great flow and country rythme. It's original and unique, and would love to hearing on the radio.

Jan 20, 2011
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i like it !
by: Anonymous

heey, good song, i see talent (:

Jan 25, 2011
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the tune
by: klb2027

I would not lie, this song has the same tune as "murder on music row" and I know for a fact this song was written before that song came out. Lonnie is extremely talented and has lots more songs just as good or better. and yes he had pitched it to someone in Nashville so it makes you wonder.

Jan 26, 2011
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Love it
by: Cathy

You have alot talent JB. You are a wonderful song writer. Keep up the great work and you will go far.

Apr 29, 2011
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Last line
by: Annie :)

I love these lyrics :) I actually would like to hear the song. Anyway, just one thing with the last line "I'm a lifetime member of the outback club". . .is a song and thats the tune I heard in my head when I read that line. #Justsayin'

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