Looking Back - lyrics critique

by D-mon
(London)

looking back
when i was young
when i met deliah, with a smoke in her hand
talkin about some dude
if i only i knew,i'd would have found something to do


the power of love
was just too much
it got out of control

pulled the trigger once
and killed 2
one i burried
the other i cursed

yh if only i knew
looking back
deliah was just an illusion
of a dream that would never
come true
a falso hope
like some kind of forbidden fruit

yh like some kind of forbidden fruit

Now it's all gone
and i'm left all alone
with a death of my concience
and curse on my soul

the pain so strong
i can't take it no more
she wasn't worth this
i don't love her any--more

yh cause' lookin back
if only i knew
dliah was just an illusion
of a dream that would never
come tue
a falso hope
like some kind of forbidden fruit

yh like some kind of forbidden fruit