Lonely Roamer- soft pop - lyrics critique

by Lauren Laine

Ok this was a song that just kind of popped in to my head so it may not be too good, but please give me your opinion! I did put thought to it though!

She cries she cries
the tears resemble rain from the sky
she hopes and hopes
that one day she will be loved

then she looks to above tears in her eyes
searcing for an answer
knowing it will take time
and she wonders why it feels
like no one's home
on this lonely planet is where she roams

the sun can not help
it makes her realize
that the life she has never goes right
no one is there to hear her cry
she could stop a draught from the tears she cries
cries oh

Then she looks to above
tears in her eyes
searching for an answer
knowing it will take time
and she wonders why it feels
like no ones home
on this lonely planet is where she roams

Well only she knows
that what doesn't kill her makes her stronger
and she always knows
that she will always be (hold for 6 beats)
a lonely roamer

(softly)
Then she looks to above
tears in her eyes
searching for an answer
knowing it will take time
and she wonders why it feels
like no ones home
on this lonely planet is where she roams