Lonely Farewell Lyrics Critique - Rock Blues Song

by Roos
(Netherlands)

Hi, my name is Roos, i live in the netherlands. I play guitar acoustic & electric and i write my own lyrics. Hope you will leave comments or give critique =)

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Lonely farewell

Staring out the window
sunlight floods in
there’s a place no-one goes
where no-one’s ever been
wondering if the stars will lead
my way down that road
wondering if the sun will rise
once more before I go

-bridge-
breathing in, I pack my bags and leave
but watch my step
once I’ve gone down there
there’s no chance in getting back

-chorus-
I’ve been waiting for far too long
to take a chance
take a risk
to search where I belong
I’ve been waiting, waiting, for far too long
when the next sun rises
I’ll be far away, gone

Staring out the window
the sunlight fades away
dreaming of that journey
scared to leave, but afraid to stay
wondering if the stars will lead
my way down that road
making a decision
when the next sun rises
I will be gone

-bridge-

-chorus x2-