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Livin in a shadow (of Love) - Lyric Critique

by Beth
(New Zealand)

Never known of a love so deep
now only shadows casted over me
Im covered in dust
Left behind with broken memorires, and the worst thing of it all I dont know who you are underneath
Or underneath me

Who am i to be now that your gone
im longing for some love and i thought you were the one for me
Love lost love found
Now my love is lost again
Im so alone im stuck
Livin in a shadow . . . of love

-ohoh- livin in a shadow of love




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Livin in a shadow (of Love) - Lyric Critique

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Sep 13, 2008
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hi
by: Anonymous

I thought the lyrics were good but the song needs more length well done and keep writing

Jan 22, 2009
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by: Anonymous

It's pretty good, I can sort of see the message you're trying to put out. keep writing.

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