Live With It Lyrics Critique - Alternative/Punk Rock

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Live With It Lyrics Critique - Alternative/Punk Rock

by Corey
(Wentworth, NH)

I haven't written the whole song yet, this is just the beginning. It was kind of thrown together really quickly, but then I got stuck. Here it goes.

Just live with it, live with it, live with it
You're gonna be all right, all right
Just live with it, live with it, live with it
You're gonna make it through it
So stop complaining
You're gonna kill me ever so slowly
With your constant whining

That's all I've got so far, so feel free to say what you like and don't like and if there is any words I should change or if you have ideas for more lyrics. Thanks

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Live With It Lyrics Critique - Alternative/Punk Rock

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Mar 07, 2009
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S'okay...
by: Anonymous

Um... I think that its alright for a few reasons. First of all its way to repetitive the whole,"Live with it! live with it! thing. Second not every line should rhyme but at least a few should which i didn't see in your song. But keep on writin'! I'm sure if you continue to write songs they'll just get better and better. If you don't like or appreciate my comment... Live with it, Live with it :P

Mar 07, 2009
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thanks
by: Corey

Thank you for the comments, I've only started writing. Writing songs is my main way to express myself, but comments are always welcome. So thanks Anonymous

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