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Life Board - Lyrics Critique

by Catrionaa
(Nottingham)

Verse 1
I Want Love You Only Hurt,
The Fire Round My Heart Still Burns,
My Times Of Weakness Are Your Strongest Hours,
Your Words Are Razor Sharp Like Pliers,
I'm The Figure, You Are The Hands,
My Every Step's To Your Command.

Chorus
Boy I'm Tired Of Your Games,
I Need A Shelter From The Pain,
You Lie, I Do Nothing,
I Cry, While You're Laughing,
Well That's All Gunna Change,
The Stepping Stones Will Re-Arrange,
'Cause Starting Tonight,
I'm Rolling The Dice,
And I'm Walking Off Your Life Board, Life Board,
Yeah I'm Walking Off Your Life Board.

Verse 2
Yet Sometimes When I Look At You,
The Love In Your Eyes Is True,
And When We Kiss, It's Intimate,
I Love You More Than A Little Bit,
But That Don't Change A Single Thing,
And That's Why There's This Song To Sing.

Chorus




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Life Board - Lyrics Critique

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Sep 03, 2010
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Include details about your song.
by: Mantius

Include information about the song and say exactly what you're looking for in a critique.

Sep 11, 2010
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What I Want
by: Anonymous

I Just Want People To Say What They Think Of It So Far :)

Sep 11, 2010
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:)
by: Anonymous

Heyy i don't know you but your song lyrics aer amaazing !! ;) ♥

Sep 11, 2010
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Hahaaa.
by: Catrionaa

Thanksss Stranger ;) <3

Nov 18, 2010
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wow.
by: anyother poet

my title pretty much says it all. i absoulutely love this song, its great. really spoke to me. made me think bout my past 2 relationships... your really poetic. I enjoy your work.

<3 I wanna see more!!!

Nov 18, 2010
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Thanks
by: Catrionaa

Thanks :) I've Got A Bridge For That Too

I Ain't Being Your Chess Piece No More,
So Try And Your Board Will Hit The Floor,
It'll Hurt But I'm Willing To Try,
To Give Up All That I Am And Fly.

xx

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