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Letters Of Regret lyrics critique - Country/soft rock?

by kawika osborn
(hawaii)

Verse 1
Dearest Courtney,
My first love that was true
I have often thought of you
and all that we went through......
It has been so very long
I wonder where it all went wrong
I awoke to find you gone
never even said so long
I hope this letter finds you strong

chorus

I wanna say im sorry
Well I guess I never learned
To give you what it is you yearned
and everything that you deserved

Thank you for the good times
That I never will forget
So Im sending you this letter of regret
Letters of regret

Verse 2

Jessica my love
I hold you in my heart
Im the reason that we had to part
I lied to you right from the very start......

Im sorry If I gave you hell
and for the truths I did not tell
I hope in life you have excelled
And when you find it in the mail
I hope this letter finds you well

chorus
I wanna say Im sorry
And tell you that I miss
Your outward happiness
My time with you was blessed

Thank you for the good times
That I never will forget
That is why Im sending you
This letter of regret
letter of regret

Verse 3

My darling April
My love for you is strong
Your like the chorus to my song
I never ment to do you wrong

Im sorry that I was a mess
I hope I have the right address
to tell you that Im over it
and that ive found soberness
I need you back to find true happiness
I hope that you will answer this

chorus

I wanna say Im sorry
I should of given you my best
Held you high above the rest
But instead I gave you stress

Thank for the best times
And I hope theres better yet
If only you say yes
To this letter of regret
this letter of regret

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