Let me sleep in silent dream before you go - lyrics critique

by Sharvinvijay
(Malaysia)

Smile my woman smile…
It’s the only thing I have in this world

Love baby just love…
I’m just sacred I would die alone

It’s amazing how you made me believe in God
For a moment I believe He sent you over to me.

(Bridge)
Why are you leaving, it’s just so hard to accept…
Don’t leave me
Leave me…
Leave me…
Back to the streets where you found me

I would not able to stand or move
Cause in every corner
I turn into then,
I will be expecting you when...

but you had gone.

And in every corner
You the healer will turn into my wounder…

(Chorus)
Before you spread your wings,
Let me sleep in your arms and never wake me up
And never waking up,

And never waking up…from our dream.
From only our dream I made for you.

I would not say I loved you
I’m afraid you have one.

Would you have the courage as the woman I know?
You say you want to find the pure and the true.

See it in my eyes, you will believe and feel it.

Just talking
(But if you already have one smile my woman smile…It’s the only thing I have in this world. I don’t stop you just let me do something before you go)

Before you spread your wings,
Let me sleep in your arms and never wake me up
And never waking up,

And never waking up…from our dream.
From only our dream I made for you.


Why are you leaving, it’s just so hard to accept…
Don’t leave me
Leave me…
Leave me…
Back to the streets where you found me

I would not able to stand or move
Cause in every corner
I turn into then,
I will be expecting you when

But you had gone.

And in every corner
You the healer will turn into my wounder…

(Chorus)
Before you spread your wings,
Let me sleep in your arms and never wake me up
And never waking up,

And never waking up…from our dream.
Let me die in your arms and dream that I made for you.

Back to streets in cold streets,
I wonder if I going to see her again…