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let me be - lyrics review

by Megan
(orlando, florida, U.S)

hi im 17 yrs old my second song ive written. it has a 40's swing sound.


u looked u me in the eyes
i saw somethin more then i ever thought i would
somethin special
somethin different
baby can't u see

ur some much more then u will ever know
u take my heart and then u go
comin back and forth to me
make up ur mind or let me be

quit playin with my heart baby
u mean to much to me
u tell me u love me and then u leave
just make up ur mind baby


ur so much more then u will ever know
u take my heart and then u go
comin back and forth to me
make up ur mind or let me be


u know i love u so
but u cant just stay here, no
think about what ur doing
then baby and then u will see

ur some much more then u will ever know
u take my heart and then u go
comin back and forth to me
make up ur mind or let me be




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let me be - lyrics review

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Nov 14, 2008
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by: kels(:

amazing. i loved it. i can relate easily, too. nice job. (:

Nov 23, 2008
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Good!
by: Jake

This is good, a bit on the repetative side, but still good. Check out my song, "Time" and tell me what you think!!!

May 12, 2009
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wow
by: kelcy

oh my god i love this so much and i have a perfect melody for it too! goood job. keep writing

May 30, 2009
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wow!
by: Anonymous

i like it but it does repeat a bit

Dec 06, 2009
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Back and forth
by: Anonymous

I like it alot it does repeat some of the lines. I can feel what you are talking about the back and forth. The unmade up mind,can be very troubleing.

Jul 13, 2010
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ummm
by: Anonymous

yea its ok

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