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Let Her Be -Lyrics Critique -Acoustic

by Nikki
(Florida)

I always try to prove to you
that I can be something that
you won't regret,but whats the sense
in that? I'll keep trying and I'm so
sure you won't even buy it
so will just end it all here

Let her be your other half
I tried so hard,I guess not hard enough
Is she what you call the best?
was I what you called second best?
atleast I can say I tried and gave a damn
where she never cared at all

So whats the sense of this?
I'll call my quits before you
even get the chance,its fair game now
can't you see,I'm almost over you
You're so late in this game of love
that you don't even get,so
just give up.

Let her be your other half
I tried so hard,I guess not hard enough
Is she what you call the best?
was I what you called second best?
atleast I can say I tried and gave a damn
where she never cared at all

So tell me,can we give this atleast one try?
(oh not even that?)
if this is what it's come to,I'll take what I have
left to offer and take it with me
I'll leave you and not take one look back
and this isn't a bad thing,it's just a sad thing

Let her be your other half
I tried so hard,I guess not hard enough
Is she what you call the best?
was I what you called second best?
atleast I can say I tried and gave a damn
where she never cared at all

cause I'm sure she's gonna be everything
I would've never been,and let her be,I
won't be waiting.

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