"Leaving Lyrics Critique- Slower Rock Song"

by Corey
(Wentworth, NH)

This song's called Leaving

Verse 1

I've had enough
With the tough luck
I want it to be over
But you'll never be sober
So I packed up mt things
And I headed for the door
opened my wings
And searched for more

Chorus 1

Cause I'm leaving can't you see
There's nothing left for me
Cause I want more
Than a dead end job
I'm opening a new door
Don't stop me now
Cause I'm already gone

Verse 2

It was good at the start
It was all fun and games
Now it's time to move on
Through the fire and flames
I won't do your dirty work
You're a creep and a jerk

Chorus 2

That's why I'm leaving can't you see
There's nothing left for me
Cause I want more
Than poverty
I'm opening a new door
Don't stop me now
Cause I'm already gone

Verse 3

Noe I'm on my own
Making a name for myself
You will be shown
I don't belong on a shelf
I'm moving on
While you're living on someone's lawn

Chorus 3

Cause I'm leaving can't you see
There's nothing left for me
Cause I want more
Than grief and despair
don't stop me know
Cause I'm already gone
I'm already gone
That's right I'm already gone
I'm gone