Lay it away Lyrics Critique - metal

by Kyle
(Dallas Texas)

This prolly isnt the Genre yall are used to but hey what the heck. its metal has some screaming but these are the lyrics.

You make me feel good, You make me feel sooooo bad.
Do i make you feel good or do i make you feel sad?
I thought we were so close, yet i feel so far away.
You got me all twisted, you got me all confused, i dont even know what to say.
This is, goin the wrong way, there is only one way to make me glad.

But it aint goin that way.
Shit never goes my way.
Now i feel like im fallin away!

(Chorus)
I lay it away in waste as you watch me, watch you, watching me Falling away (FA FA FA FALLING AWAY!!!) From you!!!
Im falling, im falling... im falling... Please Catch me... Please catch me...


I don't know what to say!
I don't know what to do!
All i have left to do is PRAY!!!


Cuz im barely Breathing, i cant find no Air
I dont know who im kidding, imaginaing you care!
Why cant life ever be fair.

Now im falling down an endless pit.
This whole song is just me throwin a fit.

(Chorus)


I think im falling but it's too far down.
You said you'd catch me Before i hit the ground.
But the walls are to strong and im finding it too hard to breath
When i expect you to catch me you just turn and leave.

I reach out for you, i beg and plead
Im falling so damn hard
By the time i hit, My heart will be the only thing to bleed.

(Chorus)

Now here i lay on the ground,
i dont know if ill ever be found,
All i ever wanted was to be held,
But you let me go now ive been impaled.
STRAIGHT THROUGH THE HEART
but i was warned...
Now im looking for a fresh start.
I just wanna let you know youre love will be mourned.