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"Last December Lyrics Critique - Country/Pop Song"

by Giselle
(USA)

Sitting by my window
Watching the falling snow
Make light piles of white
On this cold winter night
And I'm smiling a smile
I haven't seen in while

As I think about, all joy and the love that I felt
All the nights we stayed up on the on telephone
And all the strength that you gave me
Last December
But I'd bet you don't even remember
Last December

CHORUS
You're probably off, kissing her
You've forgot, all about me
It just you, and her
No need for me
I'll be here, all alone, with m broken heart
While you run off with her
Just like Last December

Looking out my window
Watching kids playen' in the snow
They're making snowmen and angels
As I hear snowball fight yells
And I 'm laughing that laugh
I haven't heard in a while

As I think about, all the tears and the heartache I felt
All the nights I stayed up crying myself to sleep
And all the pain that you put me through
Last December
But I'd bet you don't even remember
Last December

CHORUS

You told me that you loved me
And then you just betrayed me
And left me here all alone
In this December cold

CHORUS




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by: Kristyn

I actually liked this one. A lot of people can't write holiday songs, but I think that you have the potential. This song wasn't bad. Nice job! :)

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