KYLE, Lyrics Critique.. (genre) Hip hop/blues

by Kyle Holden
(Manchester,England)

IM SO LOST.

Im so lost,
im so tired of remoulding my life,
so i drink and i smoke to feel like,
nothings hurting me,
even though nothings hurting me!

Bad times holding punishment,
my lines are ryhmes of fulfilment,
sometimes my mind will find that i could of been,
a bad guy but the world sees good in me,
i try when noticed for trying,
sit blind when my eyes are crying,
good signs come when their drying,
reclined by the truth cause im lying!

Im so lost,
im so tired of remoulding my life,
so i drink and i smoke i feel like,
nothings hurting me,
even though nothings hurting me!

Wonderfull when you wonder to a place on the path sat under you,
thunder bolts in the notes of the happy song your singing to. x2

Im not lost,
im not tired of remoulding my life,
when i sing and i just no it feels nice,
nothings hurting me,
even though nothings hurting me!

I push more than i pull,
how could anyone share my hand,
stress levels always full,
they like to think that they understand,
the depression inside my skull,
because im lacking a worthy plan,
im taurus i am the bull the zodiac harmattan!

Im not lost,
im not tired of remoulding my life,
when i sing and i just no it feels right,
nothings hurting me,
even though nothings hurting me!


im not lost,

im not tired,

when i sing and i just no it feels right,

when nothings hurting me,

will you stop hurting me?