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Kimiko By james Cook - lyrics critique

by James Cook
(Viet nam)

I just like to let U
know how much I
Love U so Kimiko Kimiko
Don't ever let me Go......

U are the only one I want to
Hold

(Chorus)
kimiko where are you
it has been a long time
I haven't seen your smile an the love in your eyes
kimiko i love you i have gone somewhere so far
i promise i will comeback and i can touch your hand......

winter spring summer and fall
I just want to share it all with you
Do you know Kimiko......

(Chorus)
kimiko where are you
it has been a long time
I haven't seen your smile an the love in your eyes
kimiko i love you i have gone somewhere so far
i promise i will comeback and i can touch your hand......

the way you run your fingers through my hair
without care I love the kimino that you wear
So sexual but all so tasteful, your beauty is truly natural
I just like to let you know how much i love you so.......
Kimiko O Kimiko.........

(Chorus)
kimiko where are you
it has been a long time
I haven't seen your smile an the love in your eyes
kimiko i love you i have gone somewhere so far
i promise i will comeback and i can touch your hand......

By James Cook songwriter jaycook2001@hotmail.com




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Kimiko By james Cook - lyrics critique

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Jun 28, 2011
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GOOD !!
by: Anonymous

I'm glad someone wrote song about Japanese Girl!!
You gave me a good idea

Aug 29, 2011
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Not impressed
by: Anonymous

Who or what is kikimo
repeated to many times
typical(love song) as if she just broke off with you and you just started writing some words down. not a hit OR EVEN A FILLER

SORRY

Keep on writing

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