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Killing Me Lyrics - Acoustic song

It's killing me
slowly killing me
But they, say,
Im too young to die
x2

If they knew, if they cared
What if they realised, No one is here
Would they stop. Would they give up
Would they admit, Iv took enough

Its killing me
slowly killing me
But they, say,
Im too young to die

Its killing me
slowly killing me
But they, say,

Im too young to know
Im too young for them to care
Im not taken seriously here
They say the care, that they understand
But theres alot of money for every helping hand

And its killing me
Slowly killing me
But they, say,
Im too young to die

Yeah its killing me,
Slowly killing me
But I , know
They'l never know why

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Im 16 . I've been in counciling for the last year for depression, which started when i was 13.
Basicly, thats what the songs about.

Please comment + be honest x




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Killing Me Lyrics - Acoustic song

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Mar 19, 2009
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I love your song!
by: Elizabeth -_- :)

I'm surprised I haven't ended up in counciling yet myself. I die from the inside. I'm younger than you and I think we're both too young to die. Don't let hope go. Writing songs always helps me, I hope it helps you too. anyway, your song was really good! I'm inspired by that.

Mar 24, 2009
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It's Pretty Good.
by: Kayla

I really did like you're song. It's really good. And I can tell that it's something you care a lot about, but it doesn't show it in the lyrics.
I think you should go back and add more detail and meaning to it. It has meaning, but when you write a song like this, you really just need it to hit the reader and have them say "WOW", this girl is feeling really low. You haven't put that into your song, which would make it a little better.
Good Luck With Your Song Writing Future(:

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