Kendall Lyrics Critique- Pop Punk up beat song.

by Kendall
(Louisiana)

Title: Adam's Song
Tempo: 160 BPM


Verse 1:
You are the reason why
I’m waking up, shaken up
from lingering dreams
that aren’t so sweet.
you speak so damn high
of the reflection you see
but shattered mirrors
distort the picture

Chorus:
Take my words and turn them to dirt
tell me what it’s like to be so full of worth
that you can’t feel the ground shaking beneath your feet
take my heart and break it apart
tell me how it felt alone in the dark
realizing you’ll never have me again

Verse 2:
Delayed memories
that haunt you taunt you
from confusion on make believe
and reality
you think so damn high
of a twisted image
presented as perfect
but doesn't deserve it

Chorus:
Take my words and turn them to dirt
tell me what it’s like to be so full of worth
that you can’t feel the ground shaking beneath your feet
take my heart and break it apart
tell me how it felt alone in the dark
realizing you’ll never have me again


Bridge:
The pedestal you’ve stepped onto
shows the way you look down on me
like people have completely
changed your point of view
but look around
this is you now
dead and stoned
completely alone

Chorus:
Take my words and turn them to dirt
tell me what it’s like to be so full of worth
that you can’t feel the ground shaking beneath your feet
take my heart and break it apart
tell me how it felt alone in the dark
realizing you’ll never have me again

realizing you’ll never have me again