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Just an Angel - Power Ballad - Lyric Critique

Just an Angel

I took a walk
on a cold night
I was tryin' to get my feelings right
My mind was lost in time
And my eyes were lost in space
I was tryin' to get outta this place

And that's when I saw you
You were walking towards me from a distance
Our eyes met on an instance
And the smell of you was all around me
I could feel your body touch me

And that's when you screamed my name
And you want me to play your game
Girl I never got your name
she said that's alright
just keep your mouth shut tight
I'm just an angel sent from up above
She was an angel sent from up above

So I took a look to the sky
To see if angels could fly
And to my surprise
from the corner of my eye
I saw sparks fly into the sky
There goes that angel
That an angel sent from up above

I could feel her touch
She’s an angel sent from up above
I could see into her eyes
She’s an angel
She’s an angel
She’s an angel sent from up above
She’s Just an angel sent from up above




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Just an Angel - Power Ballad - Lyric Critique

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Apr 19, 2009
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Extraordinary Talent!!!
by: Anonymous

Wow! That was pretty deep,and by far among the best I've witnessed thus far!You must have ben in deep meditation when you wrote the poem.keep it up!

Apr 24, 2009
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It's not good

Nov 29, 2009
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Keep It Up
by: B-rad

Thats Really Good Man. Keep It Up.

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